Grade 9 Zurich · MYP 4/5 · Language & Literature

The Short Story

Craft a world. Shape a character. Say something true.
Story due: March 13th Reflection due: March 19th Summative: Criteria A, B & C

What is this assignment?

You're going to write an original short story — about 1,500 words — that demonstrates your command of the craft of fiction. Strong short stories aren't just plots; they use carefully chosen language, deliberate structure, and layered meaning to say something worth saying.

This assignment has three stages: a Story Planner where you make and justify your creative decisions, the story itself, and a Writer's Reflection where you analyze your own choices with the same attention you'd bring to someone else's work.

📋 Criterion A — Planner (Formative) ✍️ Criterion B — Story (Summative) 📖 Criterion C — Story (Summative) 🔍 Criterion A — Reflection (Summative)

Three Stages

Stage 1 — Story Planner (Formative · Criterion A)

Before you write a word of your story, you'll complete a written planner documenting your creative decisions — conflict, setting, protagonist, and point of view. Submitted separately; you'll receive feedback before you draft.

Stage 2 — The Short Story (Summative · Criteria B & C) · Due March 13

A polished original short story of approximately 1,500 words using specific literary devices and a complete six-part plot structure. Your story should feel like a real piece of writing — not a checklist.

Stage 3 — Writer's Reflection (Summative · Criterion A) · Due March 19th

A structured written reflection in which you analyze your own story — identifying where you used required elements, evaluating what worked and what you'd revise, and reflecting on your process from brainstorm to final draft.


Timeline

Feb 23
Introduction & Mentor TextAssignment introduced; literary devices explored through The Pedestrian
Feb 26
Story Planner — In ClassWork through all four planner sections in class; finish at home
Feb 27
Planner Due + First LinesPlanner submitted; opening paragraph written in class to break the blank page
Mar 2
Planner Feedback + Drafting BeginsFeedback returned; revise plans if needed and continue drafting
Mar 5
In-Class DraftingSustained writing time; mid-session self-check against your planner. Rough draft should be complete at home before Friday.
Mar 6
Peer FeedbackStructured peer feedback session — swap drafts in advance via Google Classroom
Mar 9
Revision WorkshopRevise using peer feedback; teacher models revision moves at the start of class
Mar 12
Final PolishRead aloud to yourself quietly, fix endings, last edits
Mar 13
🔴 Story Due + SharingFinal draft submitted — then read a favourite passage aloud; gallery walk of excerpts
Mar 19
🔴 Reflection DueWriter's Reflection submitted via ManageBac
📋 This is your formative assessment. It will be assessed against Criterion A and you will receive written feedback before you begin drafting your story.

The Story Planner

For each section, make a decision and explain your reasoning in full sentences. Don't just describe what you'll do — explain why.


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Conflict

Identify the type of conflict your story will use. Consider: character vs. character, character vs. self, character vs. society, character vs. nature, character vs. fate/supernatural.

Explain why this type of conflict is the right choice for the story you want to tell. How does it shape what happens? What does it allow you to explore thematically?

Why is this conflict the engine of your story, and not a different type?

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Setting

Describe the time and place of your story. Then explain how your setting connects to both your protagonist and your theme — a setting that's merely a backdrop is a missed opportunity.

How does where and when your story happens shape who your character is and what the story is ultimately about?

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Protagonist

Describe your protagonist. Who are they? What do they want, and what do they fear? What makes them interesting as a character?

Then explain why this particular character is the right choice for your story. Could a different kind of protagonist have told this story better — and why not?

Why is this person the right character to carry your story's weight?

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Point of View

Choose your narrative point of view: first person, third person limited, or third person omniscient.

You must justify your choice. Think about what each POV allows you to do — and what it prevents. Why is your chosen POV the best lens for this particular story?

What does your chosen POV allow you to do that the others would not?


Criterion A · Analyzing (Formative)
Your planner will be assessed on the quality of your analytical thinking — specifically, how well you explain and justify your creative decisions using literary understanding. Strong planners make clear connections between craft choices and the effects they create.
✍️ This is your summative assessment, graded against Criteria B and C. Due: March 13.

Writing Your Story

Your story must be approximately 1,500 words. The best stories use these elements because they serve the story, not because they tick a box.


Bringing Characters to Life

Your story must use both types of characterization:

Direct Characterization

The narrator or another character explicitly tells us something about a character's personality, appearance, or nature.

Indirect Characterization

We infer what a character is like through their actions, dialogue, thoughts, appearance, or how others react to them — without being told directly.


Saying Something Without Saying It

Implied Theme

Your story must have a theme — a meaningful idea about human experience — that emerges through what happens and how, not through a character stating it outright. The reader should feel the theme without you spelling it out.


The Craft Requirements

Your story must include at minimum:

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Foreshadowing

At least 1 — a hint or clue about what's to come.

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Symbolism

At least 1 — an object, place, or event carrying deeper meaning.

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Metaphors

At least 2 — direct comparisons that deepen meaning without "like" or "as."

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Similes

At least 2 — comparisons using "like" or "as."

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Imagery

At least 5 — specific sensory language covering sight, sound, smell, taste, and touch.


The Shape of Your Story

Your story must use all six parts of plot structure — in whatever proportions serve your narrative best.

1

Exposition

Establish your world — setting, characters, and situation — giving readers what they need to enter the story.

2

Inciting Incident

The moment that disrupts the status quo and sets the central conflict in motion.

3

Rising Action

A series of events that build tension as your protagonist works toward — or struggles against — the conflict.

4

Climax

The turning point — the moment of highest tension where something decisive happens or is decided.

5

Falling Action

The aftermath of the climax — events that begin to resolve the tension.

6

Resolution

The new equilibrium — how things end up, and what has changed.


How Your Story Will Be Graded

Criterion B · Organizing
How effectively you organize and structure your story — the coherence of your plot, use of paragraphing and sequencing, and how well the structure serves the narrative's meaning.
Criterion C · Producing Text
How effectively you use language to create effect — your literary devices, word choices, style, and overall control of the writing.
🔍 This is your summative Criterion A assessment. Submit your completed reflection via ManageBac. Due: March 19.

Writer's Reflection

Analyze your own story with the same attention you'd bring to someone else's. Be specific, be honest, and use the language of literary craft. Vague answers — "I used a metaphor to add description" — do not demonstrate Criterion A thinking.


Section 1

Theme and Intention

What is your story about beneath the surface?
What is the theme of your story? State it as an idea about human experience — not a topic. Not "loyalty" but "loyalty has limits when it requires you to lose yourself."
How did you imply this theme without stating it directly? Identify two or three specific choices — a character decision, a symbol, an image, the ending — that carry the theme. Explain the connection.
Section 2

Literary Device Evidence

Show where you used each required element — and why.

For each device, identify the specific moment in your story and explain the intended effect. A brief quote is ideal where possible.

DeviceQuote or moment from your storyWhy did you make this choice?
Foreshadowingat least 1
Symbolismat least 1
Metaphor 1at least 2 total
Metaphor 2
Simile 1at least 2 total
Simile 2
Direct Characterization
Indirect Characterization
Imageryat least 5 — one per sense
— See
— Hear
— Smell
— Taste
— Touch / Feel
Section 3

What Worked

Evaluate your writing with the same eye you'd use on someone else's.
Identify one moment, line, or technique in your story that you feel was effective. Quote it or describe it precisely — then explain specifically why it works. What effect does it create for the reader?
Section 4

What You Would Revise

Honest self-assessment is a sign of strength, not weakness.
Identify one thing you would change if you had more time. What would you do differently — and what effect would that change create? "I'd fix my grammar" is not enough. Think about craft: structure, character, language, theme.
Section 5

Process Reflection

One or two sentences per stage — be specific, not general.
StagePromptYour response
BrainstormingWhat idea surprised you or took you in an unexpected direction?
PlanningHow did the planner change or sharpen your original idea?
DraftingWhere did you get stuck, and how did you move forward?
RevisingWhat did peer feedback make you see that you hadn't noticed yourself?
What good looks like.

Strong reflections are specific. They quote the story. They name effects, not just techniques. They're honest about what didn't work as well as what did. The evidence table is your floor — Sections 3, 4, and 5 are where Criterion A thinking is really demonstrated.


Criterion A · Analyzing (Summative)
This reflection is assessed on the depth and specificity of your literary analysis. Strong responses identify precise moments in the text, explain intended effects, and evaluate how successfully those effects were achieved — not just describe what techniques were used.

How to Support Your Writer

This assignment asks students to make genuine creative decisions, write an original short story, and then reflect analytically on their own work. Your role is not to shape the story — it's to support the conditions in which your student can do their best thinking.

🗓️ Key Dates to Know

  • The Story Planner is submitted first and returned with feedback before drafting begins.
  • The Short Story final draft is due March 13.
  • The Writer's Reflection is due March 19 — four days after the story, giving students time to look back with fresh eyes.

💬 Questions That Help (Without Doing the Work)

  • "What's the most interesting thing about your main character?"
  • "If someone read your story without any explanation, what do you think they'd walk away thinking or feeling?"
  • "Why did you choose to tell it from that point of view? What would change if it were different?"
  • "Where in the story do you feel the tension most? How did you build up to that moment?"
  • "For the reflection — is there one line in your story you're proud of? Why does it work?"

✅ Helpful Ways to Support

  • Read through the assignment requirements together so you both understand what's expected.
  • Ask your student to explain their story idea out loud — talking through a story often helps clarify it.
  • Encourage a first draft that's imperfect — the goal is to get ideas down, then revise.
  • For the reflection, ask your student to read you their favourite line and explain why they wrote it that way. That's exactly the thinking the reflection asks for.

⚠️ What to Avoid

  • Don't write or rewrite any part of the story or reflection — the grade reflects your student's work, and both documents need to be theirs.
  • Don't dictate plot or character decisions — ask questions instead and let your student arrive at answers independently.
  • Don't use AI tools to generate the story or reflection — students should discuss any use of AI tools with their teacher first.
  • Don't stress perfection — this assignment is designed to stretch students, and some struggle is part of the learning.

📬 Getting in Touch

  • If your student is stuck or worried, encourage them to reach out to Mr. Colin directly — that's always the best first step.
  • Questions about grades or criteria can be directed to ManageBac or via email.